Aaj fir udasiyon ne, dil pe dala dera,
Utha zamin se koshish ki, udne ki ambar ki oar,
Bahut kacchi hai lekin, mere hauslon ki dor.
Kadam mud gaye udhar fir, mila thoda sukun wahan,
Ja baitha us sahil pe, dubi kayi kashtiyan jahan,
Thodi dur hai aur raasta, jata jo kshitij ki oar,
Prayatna kiya mann ne bahut, badhne ka aage do kadam,
Shayad aaj mita hi jaoon, bandhnon ka ye bharam,
Darta hu lekin, kya ye saahas kar paunga,
Kyunki ye janta hu main,
Do kadam badha to dub jaunga…
Do kadam badha to dub jaunga…


11 comments:
dub kar hi to tu jaanega
zindagi ke ishaaron ko pehchanega
jo hua hai usko samajh paayega
jo hone wala hai uski kadar kar paayega
to do kadam badhane se darr mat
dub jaane se darr mat...
apne dil ki sunta ja...
kadam aage badhataja...
Thanx yaar! that was a real nice comment :)
very touching....and lots of introspection involved if i m not wrong...
have u ever been wrong bfr this ;) bas yaar was a lil low so went and sat down at the beach and wrote this..
what a beautiful poem vineet.... the words flow together really well...
Kya aage badhne se log sab bhool jaate hain itni aasani se? Kya pata aapne peeche mud ke dobara dekha hi nahin hoga....shayad koi aapka intezaar kar raha tha aapko sambhalne ke liye...Sometimes spontaneously we take decisions to move on but regret later ki kash humne ek aur baar try kiya hota
thanx Smriti...
@Anonymous
Sometimes its too late to go back coz nothing remains the same.. neither you, nor the other person.. and not even your feelings..
Thanks for writing this.
"No one can live as an island, journeying through the life alone.
Since we are most loved by our friends,
No on can separate us anymore."
dude.. no matter what.. you've always got friends around.. to help u swim back to the shore.. cheers..!!
beautifully framed..keep it up..:-)
Thanx a ton :)
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